notice
notice
drop
into neutral waters
no need of spark
or flame
mind will still flare
that’s what minds do
like fireworks
watched
from far away
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notice
drop
into neutral waters
no need of spark
or flame
mind will still flare
that’s what minds do
like fireworks
watched
from far away
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Lovely! Neutral. Not still.
I saw that.
I don't have strong feelings about it, although conserving words is often the better option, I've found.