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Phil Brown's avatar

A masterful job with the form, and I loved how it is still coherent. I even enjoyed it!

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Well, hey! Thanks for reading and "even enjoying it!"

Joyce Beth McMurtrey's avatar

Thanks for the description of this kind of poem.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Whenever I use a form, I try to remember to explain the form first. So many people today are unaware of the many more formal ways to write poems. I love testing them out--I think I grow from doing so--although free verse is my clear favorite.

Janice Falls's avatar

not easy, but worthwhile :)

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Thanks. I assume you mean the form?