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Yesterday Jane's avatar

I love this one, Amrita. ...the fogfalr, the sky feathering your face... a beautiful walk into the day.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Thank you! It took me a while to name the precipitation. It was not rain, not even drizzle. Finally I came up with fogfall, which is actually what it is. We live only 15 miles from the coast.

Jan Haag's avatar

Oh, the lines "fogfall wets my dog/and me" will so stay with me, as will those sky feathers... I love thinking of the feathers as a verb, as you've done here, and as a noun phrase! Lovely!