Precip
Precip
First light quiet roads
fogfall wets my dog
and me
Looking up
sky feathers my face
news fades
In spreading warmth
we walk into the day
Precip
First light quiet roads
fogfall wets my dog
and me
Looking up
sky feathers my face
news fades
In spreading warmth
we walk into the day
I love this one, Amrita. ...the fogfalr, the sky feathering your face... a beautiful walk into the day.
Oh, the lines "fogfall wets my dog/and me" will so stay with me, as will those sky feathers... I love thinking of the feathers as a verb, as you've done here, and as a noun phrase! Lovely!