Loss Again 2011 Motorcycle man’s real bad— hospital again, he said mucosal melanoma Phone is breaking up but Bird’s tone is clear his shoulders sound slumped This man knows grief
Beautiful and heartbreaking. It's amazing how grief can be deeply expressed by a slump of shoulders, a minimum of words. Thank you!
Thank you, Julie. I guess one of my signatures as a poet is I write spare.
I really enjoy the spareness. It is both jewel and light from the jewel.
What a lovely comment! Thank you!
I can feel the grief in these few words, the loss
Then I've done my job. Thank you.
I love how you can hear the sound of slumped shoulders through a wire.
I know. Isn't it amazing?
I agree with Janice. Your words say it all.
Thank you, Joyce.
You are most welcome.
Beautiful and heartbreaking. It's amazing how grief can be deeply expressed by a slump of shoulders, a minimum of words. Thank you!
Thank you, Julie. I guess one of my signatures as a poet is I write spare.
I really enjoy the spareness. It is both jewel and light from the jewel.
What a lovely comment! Thank you!
I can feel the grief in these few words, the loss
Then I've done my job. Thank you.
I love how you can hear the sound of slumped shoulders through a wire.
I know. Isn't it amazing?
I agree with Janice. Your words say it all.
Thank you, Joyce.
You are most welcome.