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Greg Carman's avatar

Beautiful in its simplicity. Someday I might share my experience of cloistered refuge.

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

I'd love that. Thanks, Greg. I just realized that I misused the word "apace." It actually means walking fast, not slow. Back to the drawing board on that poem....

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Jan Haag's avatar

I didn't know this meaning of "cover" either... thanks for that! And what a nice poem emerged from it, especially that strong last stanza with those marvelous two landing lines!

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Thank you! You seem to like my closures, and I'm delighted by that.

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