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Ana Lisa de Jong's avatar

So delightful

Jan Haag's avatar

Nicely done, Amrita! The pantoum is a tricky form, and you've made it work wonderfully here!

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

ooooh, thank you! I've written about 45 pantoums, but some are so clunky. I felt less hesitant about this one.

Marnie Ritch's avatar

Beautiful!

Greg Carman's avatar

You keep on educating me! Thank you💕