(The pantoum is a poetic form originating in 15th century Malaysia that uses repetition. It's a poem of any length composed of four-line stanzas in which the second and fourth lines of each stanza serve as the first and third lines of the next stanza. The final stanza is often two lines from the first stanza.)
devotion — a pantoum
delight pours out of her
at the brave tiny birds
filled with anthem to greet
this blemished world
brave tiny birds
cheer on her courage
save our blemished world
they warble bold, pipe joy
they entice her courage
mere snacks for hawks
warble bold and pipe joy
croon beauty, trill wonder
mere snacks for hawks
yet they live their lives
trill and croon beauty until
she is engraved with reverence
they tend to their lives
build nests and feed babies
she is engraved with reverence
and carved in devotion
birds greet with anthem
she is filled with delight
So delightful
Nicely done, Amrita! The pantoum is a tricky form, and you've made it work wonderfully here!