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felice rhiannon's avatar

may there be many more breaths and many more poems! so glad to know about this form...short, clear, open.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

I missed seeing this comment, I’m sorry. Yes, I like the limitation!

Jan Haag's avatar

Gorgeous cinquain, Amrita! Both in form and excellent wordage!

Janice Falls's avatar

perfection! love this! xoxo