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Jan Haag's avatar

Nice pithy little poem... "pulse threading / through / life's heartbeat"... wow!

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Thank you, Jan. I don't think it's finished yet, really....but I do like that ending line.

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Greg Carman's avatar

Wow! Missed this yesterday.

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Glad you read it today!

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Marisol Muñoz-Kiehne's avatar

Awe and pain passions

Intertwined, like lovers’ legs

Deep within, one source

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

yes!

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