waves roll in Patience is being at peace with the process of life. —Louise Hay most difficult lesson waiting with a warm heart life dishes sharp curves surprise, shock the gift of a body lightning splits the oak it can swing either way phone rings, we were mistaken, the doctor says she’ll live this time.
Oh, I'd pay for those first three lines... they're so good! And that space break between "she'll live" and "this time" made my breath catch. Good work, Amrita!
Oh, I'd pay for those first three lines... they're so good! And that space break between "she'll live" and "this time" made my breath catch. Good work, Amrita!
Oh, you really got my intention with the stanza break and then "this time." Thank you for being such a good reader!
Beautiful poem, Amrita. And oh, Louise Hay. She was so wise. xo
Thank you, and yes! She was.
So tender and emotive. Each stanza is perfect.
High praise, Allie! Thank you!