thirty-seven years ago today a moment unsought, unexpected breath swept away sensing your heart recognition’s engine ignited— a flailing bird caught in my chest terrified to open again afraid to fail irresistible the pull
I don't know why, but the last three lines of the poem were repeated. Unintended. I'm sure it was my posting error, but how? I copy and paste from Scrivener.
yes. My friends were horrified. I already had three failed marriages. But of course, this was the one--and I sensed that immediately. But it freaked me out so much that the first month I knew him, I lost fifteen pounds!
Oomph! ‘Irresistible the pull’ indeed!
Yes!
Strange, three lines got repeated at the end of the poem. Unintended.
Thank you SO MUCH for attending yesterday!
Oh, I just thought the repetition was for emphasis - worked for me 😉
laughing!
"...flailing bird..." brave bird... Congratulations!
What a blessing in my life.
I don't know why, but the last three lines of the poem were repeated. Unintended. I'm sure it was my posting error, but how? I copy and paste from Scrivener.
Happy anniversary to courage.
yes. My friends were horrified. I already had three failed marriages. But of course, this was the one--and I sensed that immediately. But it freaked me out so much that the first month I knew him, I lost fifteen pounds!