the word well dropping in sinking down sometimes long the wait then a glimpse nab a few grainy, smooth, surprising at times an unlocked flow cast my face back drink
My friends and I used to joke, when someone said "Well, …" and if they paused long enough I'd say, "Gee that's deep!" I had a similar crossover from the subject line to the end of the poem. Nice, and deep!
Nice! Love the surprise of "grainy, smooth." And those last two lines land the poem so very nicely!
Thank you! I'm always fascinated to discover what strikes readers. And you are kind enough to let me know!
Luscious...
Your photo...the words...perfection!
How kind of you! Thanks! I was quite happy when I found the photo.
My friends and I used to joke, when someone said "Well, …" and if they paused long enough I'd say, "Gee that's deep!" I had a similar crossover from the subject line to the end of the poem. Nice, and deep!
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😂 I remember that! Back in the day.
Lovely.
Thank you!
Agree with Jan!
Wonderful, thanks! Have a vibrant day....