the word well dropping in sinking down sometimes long the wait then a glimpse nab a few grainy, smooth, surprising at times an unlocked flow cast my face back drink
Nice! Love the surprise of "grainy, smooth." And those last two lines land the poem so very nicely!
Thank you! I'm always fascinated to discover what strikes readers. And you are kind enough to let me know!
Luscious...
Your photo...the words...perfection!
How kind of you! Thanks! I was quite happy when I found the photo.
Lovely.
Thank you!
Agree with Jan!
Wonderful, thanks! Have a vibrant day....
😂 I remember that! Back in the day.
Nice! Love the surprise of "grainy, smooth." And those last two lines land the poem so very nicely!
Thank you! I'm always fascinated to discover what strikes readers. And you are kind enough to let me know!
Luscious...
Your photo...the words...perfection!
How kind of you! Thanks! I was quite happy when I found the photo.
Lovely.
Thank you!
Agree with Jan!
Wonderful, thanks! Have a vibrant day....
😂 I remember that! Back in the day.