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"Each nest a colony,

each member’s role

known, scripted

cooperative

fulfilled"

I really love this part. Reading this poem feels like being immersed in a much smaller world for just a moment. Wonderful!

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Every cell beautifully built, Didi. The contrast between nature's script and our chaotic freedom is deeply moving. A wonderful poem.

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