(My first ever attempt at a sonnet. This follows the Shakespearean form; the rhyme scheme is ABAB CDCD EFEF GG.)
Oooh! Love this. Beautiful meter to the language. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you! This was HARD!!!!
i'm about to enter, for the first time, the land of sonnets as the suggested prompt for the next session of a poetry class...sigh. thanks for you unintentional encouragement.
One hint I learned in the process: look for rhymes that have many possibilities.
Excellent sonnet! And only your first attempt?! I'm in awe!
Thank you, Jan. Yes, my first attempt. They are SO HARD!
Love these!
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Thank you! They are very hard to write!
Oooh! Love this. Beautiful meter to the language. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you! This was HARD!!!!
i'm about to enter, for the first time, the land of sonnets as the suggested prompt for the next session of a poetry class...sigh. thanks for you unintentional encouragement.
One hint I learned in the process: look for rhymes that have many possibilities.
Excellent sonnet! And only your first attempt?! I'm in awe!
Thank you, Jan. Yes, my first attempt. They are SO HARD!
Love these!
w
Thank you! They are very hard to write!