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Greg Carman's avatar

“did life’s battering

crack me open?” Only in the best way, yielding goodness like a fresh egg!

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

how kind! Thank you.

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Barnstorming's avatar

So true! Especially this particular mare!

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Did she throw people, or did I misunderstand your comment?

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Daniel Skach-Mills's avatar

Ah....getting literally (or figuratively) thrown off the horse we call "life." (Do we "break" it? Or does it break us...open?) As your poem reminds us, this "horse" seems... "designed to break open our hearts, and keep them open—not once, but repeatedly..."

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Amen to that!

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Buffie's avatar

The heart wants what the heart wants, sometimes the body suffers.😊

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

so true!

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