peeling wave the board a planing blade I ride the barrel deep and long prefer a left-hand break turning toward my heart every wave stripping all but wide attention
Each time I read this...I felt called to read it again. Each word...essential. Powerful layers upon layers...thank you!
Thanks, Pamela! This is one of the few times that a poem comes out and I don't touch it.
1200 poems, I think that's happened under five times. The rest, edit edit edit.
Hang 10 💖
Each time I read this...I felt called to read it again. Each word...essential. Powerful layers upon layers...thank you!
Thanks, Pamela! This is one of the few times that a poem comes out and I don't touch it.
1200 poems, I think that's happened under five times. The rest, edit edit edit.
Hang 10 💖