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Gilly Pawson's avatar

Particularly love the last two stanzas.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

I'm thrilled that you liked those stanzas. I was afraid they would put people off.

Johanna van Straaten's avatar

Beautiful

Mare's avatar

From the factual to the mystic. A hawk. A human.

(Haiku Artist)'s avatar

I love that you included the detail about pulling out the Sibley’s guide for the hawks, Didi. It makes the whole rainy afternoon feel so warm and real.