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Mare's avatar

This is an intense and powerful poem! Truly said.

(Haiku Artist)'s avatar

That line about setting down the gnarl is the real truth, Didi. The weight of stones is too hard to carry when you are just trying to keep your head above water. ❤️

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

It sure is. Thank you for commenting, Choti Bhai.

(Haiku Artist)'s avatar

Always, Didi. Sometimes putting the stones down is the only way to keep moving. ❤️