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Jan Haag's avatar

Oh, what a scary time that must have been... and you drop the reader right into it, too, with those first five devastating lines that lead to the sixth "so often fatal." And that photo of you and Bird is just precious. And that last stanza so ominously drops us more deeply into the story of these two. Such a keeper, Amrita... your Bird and this precious poem.

Gilly Pawson's avatar

Gosh that sounds terrifying. And the overwhelming love for the newborn. The words “And a sword will pierce your own soul too” kept resonating in my mind.

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