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Mark Brown's avatar

Beautiful moment

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

thank you!

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Yesterday Jane's avatar

Yes, they act as one ... and yet, as community, too, bending in synch with each other, Giving each room to move as the winds blow.

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Buffie's avatar

Nice💛

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

💜

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

yes. We are always in community. The life experience!

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Daniel Skach-Mills's avatar

Lovely poem, Amrita. Brief, and captures the moment's truth exquisitely! Qualities I appreciate in some of my favorite Tang dynasty poets.

Daniel

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Oh my, thank you!

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Julie Roehm's avatar

ahhhhhh,sweet reminder and lovely writing!

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Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

thank you. Only 15 words, but it wouldn't go further.

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Buffie's avatar

Sweet❣️

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