earthsong she hums our home our round blue orb hurtling they’ve recorded her ultra-low thrum does she lament our undoing a song of what’s lost, or bow in praise of what’s here?
I love the double entendre of "she hums our home," which I also can read as "she hums, our home..." That pulls me right into the poem's orbit! Nicely done!
I love the double entendre of "she hums our home," which I also can read as "she hums, our home..." That pulls me right into the poem's orbit! Nicely done!
Thank you!
Beautiful Amrita! In agreement with the others and also love the question at the end. I think the answer is both.
Yes, I agree, Ellen. Thanks for reading!
with love,
Amrita
Jan said it well and I adore "she hums our home"! I am an inveterate hummer so the metaphor makes me smile. Thank you!