Daffodils
This poem is in the form of a Shadorma: six lines, syllable count for each line 3/5/3/3/7/5 Daffodils They’ve started keep watch, a whole field Their shining faces light up these arduous daytimes Bless their cheerful hearts
This poem is in the form of a Shadorma: six lines, syllable count for each line 3/5/3/3/7/5 Daffodils They’ve started keep watch, a whole field Their shining faces light up these arduous daytimes Bless their cheerful hearts
Lovely.
Beautiful, Amrita! Daffodils are my favorite. I think the Shadorma suits you.