The syllable countdown of the nonet form works so beautifully here, creating a natural funneling down into those final, powerful single-syllable lines. It perfectly captures that quiet, focused stillness of a four-thirty morning before the world wakes up. Thank you for sharing this glimpse of early morning clarity and creation!
The syllable countdown of the nonet form works so beautifully here, creating a natural funneling down into those final, powerful single-syllable lines. It perfectly captures that quiet, focused stillness of a four-thirty morning before the world wakes up. Thank you for sharing this glimpse of early morning clarity and creation!
Your comments are so helpful--to see what you notice. Thank you.
Do you have a name other than Haiku Artist that you are willing to share?
--Amrita
Subhash
Thank you, Subhash.
A beautiful vision.
Thank you!
This is such a lovely use of form that adds an exclamation point to your words and meaning. Well done Amrita 💕
Thank you! I'm enjoying playing with these forms! Hearing that they work for others is just great.
Love your title Amrita, as well as this unique form.
Thank you! I enjoy playing with these short forms.
A beautiful rhythm, Amrita! Also the juxtaposition of the nesting bird "cracking open" is lovely.
Thank you!
A perfect nonet! So nicely done, Amrita!
Thanks, Jan!