A new poem...
A New Poem…
resembles a baby giraffe,
dropped
onto the ground, raising
her head, struggling to stand
on lanky legs her life
depends on it
or it mirrors a wild river
cascading thoughtless
over rocky terrain
quickens, gaining
traction as new streams
enter
pushes out—a new shoot,
tentative, its two tender
leaves driven upward
toward fullness
rarely pours onto the page
whole
lift your hands
allow her the shape
she already knows




What a wonderful metaphor, the baby giraffe, for a new poem! Brilliant! I particularly love these lines:
"...a new shoot,
tentative, its two tender
leaves driven upward
toward fullness..."
So nicely done, Amrita!
Sweet words...thanks for sharing.